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Once upon a time,
There were twins, identical.
On the eve of their tenth birthday,
They were taken, separated.
Now the loss was great,
Not just one, but for both of them.
They lost a friend, a sister,
Their other half.
But on a sunny day,
Of their 30th birthday,
They see someone,
Who makes them think,
They are looking in a mirror.
They move closer towards each other,
In a daze, much like a dream,
The silence is broken, laughter,
They embrace.
So long apart,
So much to catch up on.
Their other half, found.
I need to show Love Never Fails, did I succeed?
Comments? Criticism? Words of advice? Anything?
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Petzfan Featured By Owner May 31, 2011
I love it! There was a TV show I saw recently that was kind of like this, but I forgot what it was called... it was real, I do remember that much, though!
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WishOnABlueMoon Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe, I believe you! And thank you! =3
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